User talk:Adaar117

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Magda Foy (November 30)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Magda Foy (December 1)
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 Amaryllis Gardener  talk 15:40, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Magda Foy
Hi Adaar117. I wanted to give you a little feedback on your article Draft:Magda Foy. While it has improved a lot since you originally submitted it, it still doesn't really have the structure of a Wikipedia biography article. For some ideas on how you might want to structure it, I would suggest you have a look at some other articles about contemporary silent film stars. While obviously Charlie Chaplin's life is much better documented, there's a lot in terms of structure in that article that can help you improve this one - for example, the use of an Infobox person template.

Hope this is helpful. If you have questions, feel free to ask me. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:20, 8 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Magda Foy has been accepted
 Magda Foy, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 12:22, 13 January 2015 (UTC)
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