User talk:Adammccartney1026/sandbox

Draft Feedback
You've pulled a few pieces of information from your sources, but they will not add significantly to Wikipedia. Once you determine the final article you add to, you might find other information you can use. JAirhart 14:07, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Adams Peer Review
Your sources look good for your article that you will be adding to. Make sure that the facts you are putting in are clear and transition well.Kcallahan01 (talk) 01:02, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

The facts look good and are interesting but if they are all going in to a a new topic or you are adding on to another one you need to connect all of them together so they are not just floating random facts. And provide a bit more information/background to make it your part a bit more significant enough to add to the main article. Other than that great start just add more to pull it all together. --Abrown8201 (talk) 05:15, 13 March 2019 (UTC)