User talk:Addisonronk/sandbox

Your draft is good and explains how privacy is limited when getting involved in social media. My only suggestion would be to maybe add something about Boyd's claims about people's intended audience vs. the actual audience when it comes to posting material online. Psconway (talk) 14:24, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Make sure to have intext citations so the reader can find the article especially after bolder claims about privacy. Overall, it looks good — Preceding unsigned comment added by Christopher.R.Phillips (talk • contribs) 14:39, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your feedback and suggestions! I will make sure to add intext citations. Addisonronk (talk) 22:08, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Article Draft
Addison, Your sources are all good, and what you've drafted is well-written but doesn't yet include much factual information from your sources. Since this is essentially a research project, I would like you to insert information that is not common knowledge. Most of what you have already is well known.JAirhart 19:34, 25 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

Thank you so much for your suggestions and feedback. I will make sure I add more factual information to my article. Addisonronk (talk) 22:11, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Your draft looks very good and well written! Just be sure to cite your sources!! Taylorpease (talk) 23:10, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you so much for reviewing my draft! I will make sure I cite sources! Addisonronk (talk) 22:09, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

=Response to Peer Review=

I greatly appreciate the comments made by my classmates and Professor Airhart about my draft. I will make sure to take their suggestions and make the changes needed. I will add sources, quotes, and more factual statements that are not as known. Thank you so much! Addisonronk (talk) 20:42, 29 March 2018 (UTC)