User talk:Adebene/sandbox

I think the information that was added seemed really credible and came from reliable and current sources but I feel like you could add a lot more information about the topic you chose. I also had a hard time figuring out exactly what you were writing about so I think explaining it more explicitly in the beginning of the paragraph would help with that. I also think you could use a lot more sources. Mikemedina1 (talk) 20:35, 4 December 2020 (UTC)