User talk:Adeledaniels5/Early childhood intervention/OReinebach Peer Review

Sophia's response to peer review: Thanks for the notes! We should definitely reorder that section to be chronological, and hyperlink to the relevant Wikipedia articles. Also, we will need to do more research about other types of developmental delays and how they qualify under IDEA. And I believe we have research in the works to expand further about deaf and hard of hearing early intervention! Scino23 (talk) 16:45, 27 March 2022 (UTC)

Ruth's response to peer review: Thank you so much for the review! One of our group members is currently working on the history of EDHI. We certainly will expand on why it was established. I plan to add more background information on EDHI before diving more into prior practices/protocols for the implementation of EDHI! Once we get closer to publishing, we will reorganize the sections to make sure it flows smoothly and have the appropriate citations. Tooth21 (talk) 17:02, 3 April 2022 (UTC)