User talk:Adeledaniels5/Language deprivation in children with hearing loss/Kristyben Peer Review

Thank you very much, Kristyben. I have noted all of your comments on my docs. I will try to edit my cited quote into a better phrase. Great feedback. Thank you again! :)

Me too! I agreed! Thanks so much for your time to feedback & I try my best to editing my references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lily's pads (talk • contribs) 15:54, 30 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your feedback Kristen! We really tried to make our comments unbiased so I really appreciate that you noticed that in our draft. I am not sure if there would be another way to paraphrase the cited quote, but it is definitely something to think about and I can work on making the paragraph flow easier. It has been really difficult to find a lot of sources but we can certainly look for more! Thank you again for reading it! I appreciate your feedback :) Skylar2002 (talk) 02:22, 14 April 2022 (UTC)