User talk:Ademsemir/Muna AbuSulayman

Overall, this is a well-written article. You will want to remove the references and external links to Facebook, as well as any blogs. You will also want to reformat the embedded links and refs. The article needs to be cleaned up and copy edited for grammar and compliance with the Manual of Style. As far as copyright, I didn't find any blatant copyright violations pertaining to text.

There remain concerns over the images used. I understand that you are waiting confirmation of sorts from the subject. In order to ensure that Wikipedia has proper permission to use the images, you need to: It's not sufficient to state that you have permission from the copyright holder. You have to actually provide proof of permission.
 * 1) provide evidence of permission by either linking to the subject's website to a page that offers an explicit grant of permission (public domain) that complies with the licensing policy or
 * 2) the copyright holder needs to forward an email granting permission to permissions-commons@wikimedia.org.

On another note, it would be beneficial for you to build the article at Muna Abu-Sulayman. When you have consensus to move the article, it is actually a quick step to do (hitting a button, writing the new name, and hitting "submit"). Writing a separate article actually created a lot of unnecessary work. We will need to delete the article at Muna AbuSulayman when you are ready to move the article. If nobody responds to your proposal after a couple of days, then a move would be permissible. If you need help with any of the above (cleanup/editing/formatting), please don't hesitate to ask. Regards, Cindamuse (talk) 12:34, 9 November 2010 (UTC)