User talk:AdenWhite/sandbox

Article draft feedback
This is a good starting point for additions! Everything you've added here so far seems like excellent information to include in this article. The biggest thing this needs is still more information and a sense for how you plan to connect these individual sentences into a section of the article (or are they starting points for multiple sections?). Some notes I have as you continue researching, adding, and revising are:
 * Ideas for additions...this lake sits within a national forest, which is worth mentioning (and should be easy to find sources for), what kinds of recreation the lake is set up for, access to the lake, climate and geology information...
 * every time a statement of fact is made (such as "At the deepest point the water level reaches about 41 feet on a 35 acre piece of land"), you will want to link to the source you got that information from at the end of that sentence.
 * related to the previous point, you will also want to create a reflist
 * are you considering adding an image to the article?

I think those are my biggest notes based on this draft. Let me know if you have any questions, and I look forward to seeing your final edits!Nicoleccc (talk) 20:20, 8 November 2019 (UTC)