User talk:Adi Sathi/sandbox

Content: The site provided more than the minimum of three sections, including the introductory paragraph. Figures: No images are present. References: The site appears to have the minimum of six references that are required. However, reference #2, #3, and #6 are the same. Also, there are a few facts throughout the site that are not cited. Make sure to provide citations when needed!

Introductory Paragraph:
 * Strong introductory paragraph with a few grammatical errors. Great last sentence!
 * not sure if there needs to be a comma after “New York City” in the first line
 * write out the AFL-CIO in full before using its acronym
 * change “...who don’t even work for an hourly wage….” to “..who do not work for an hourly wage…”
 * Awkward wording. Consider changing it: “NTWA is committed to a vision of labor organizing that is multi-ethnic, multi-generational that fights for labor justice”

Origins of the Union:
 * Clear and concise history of NTWA.
 * Change “Rutgers” to “Rutgers University” and possibly link it to its Wikipedia page
 * change ‘refused to work to protest the unfair regulations the city...” to “refused to work in protest of unfair regulations...”
 * Perhaps add in the specifics on “the unfair regulations the city had placed on their work.” You may want to consider listing some of these regulations.
 * List other organizations that helped founded NYTWA.

Chapters:
 * “The National Taxi Workers’ Alliance is comprised of 2 active chapters, one in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania and the other in New York City, New York.” Consider changing this sentence to “The National Taxi Workers’ Alliance is comprised of two active chapters. One is located in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania and the other is located in New York City, New York.”
 * “The National describes it role as helping to “embolden the local chapters” Consider changing this sentence to “NTWA describes its role as helping to ‘embolden the local chapters.’” Or are you talking about the national chapter here? It is a bit confusing.
 * change “work to strategize on key campaigns and organizing drives with the local...” to “work to strategize on key campaigns and organize drives with local…”
 * Great work on incorporating the fact that NYC’s chapter is the largest. However, the largest out of how many? How many chapters are there today?

Long Term Goals
 * Provide the link for the Wikipedia page on the Fair Labor Standards Act