User talk:AdinaAnn

Welcome!
Hello, AdinaAnn, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Neutral Perspective
Hi! I am a Deaf person myself with a strong background in Deaf culture. While I understand the urge to present biased information, especially during the excerpt related to how hearing people would approach deaf babies/people. I can't help but notice that the information presented is still biased, even though it shows a clear effort to be neutral. I would encourage you to expand more on the "surgery," since not every hearing people would know about cochlear implants. For example, you can expand more on why hearing people tend to advocate for cochlear implants while deaf people doesnt. I feel like this would be more informative but it would be neutral because both point of views would be shown. I also feel that this would be meaningful for someone who wants to learn more about Deaf culture.

AdinaAnn (talk) 22:45, 4 February 2018 (UTC)

Welcome
Please note refs here go right AFTER punctuation. Happy editing. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:15, 8 February 2018 (UTC)