User talk:Adinjoshi1/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi, so I found your article draft, but it took me a while. You might want to go back and look at how to make it into it's own page. Your article is missing a lead where you summarize your artcilce briefly. The lead would help the reader understand exactly what this is about. Without it there's just a bunch of information without a direct definition of what DoNotPay is. I would suggest also moving the early years to the bottom of the page since the most recent (the services section) is the most relevant to the reader looking for information on DoNotPay. I think this article pick is really interesting. The title really caught my eye. --Lolbabycowboy (talk) 06:09, 11 October 2022 (UTC) (talk) 06:09, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review SF
I enjoyed reading your article and think that you made some impactful contributions! Adding the founding section in its entirety and adding to the services section will make a great difference to the article. The work is all really concise, and easy to read with a NPOV. For grammar, turn "straightfoward" into one word in the first paragraph, and a hyphen in "well-documented. SeenaBerkeley (talk) 01:18, 13 October 2022 (UTC)