User talk:Adleyd1/sandbox

Hi Dennis,

In class today the professor told us to leave our articles in our sandboxes, not put them on the discussion page of the article, and to make comments on the articles that we signed up to peer review on the sandbox's discussion page. She said that she is going to regrade assignment four on Tuesday because there was confusion about where to post the articles.

You need a reference after the first and third paragraphs of your first section or Summary section. The second to last sentence in the summary needs to be reworded, and your second reference might need more info. Just to be safe I cited everything as if I was writing in APA or MLA with links to websites.

You can use CAF website to get information on goals and membership, but I had a Wikipedian comment on using an organization's website so you might want to look into that. She also commented on using current "news" information, such as the Hillary Clinton information you have.

Bryanw3 (talk) 04:01, 11 October 2011 (UTC)