User talk:Adogra1/sandbox

Brittney's Peer Review
I like that you have your page planned out before adding to it. It seems like it would help when researching information. The number of headings and subheadings you have is impressive. This article seems like it will be very thorough. Since the outline is so detailed, I don't have any suggestions. If you elaborate on each bullet point you have, this will be a great article. I am going to make an outline similar to this one because it seems to be very helpful.

Response to Peer Review
Hi Brittany! Thank you for taking the time and evaluating my Wikipedia article. The constructive criticism helped me focus & realize that I am happy with the direction in which my article is developing. I will continue to expand on the bullet points I have created in order to further my work. The review was helpful in ensuring that my article has clear research objectives. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adogra1 (talk • contribs) 03:15, 14 November 2018 (UTC)