User talk:Adolby

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Hello, Adolby, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Hi Adolby. Nice work on your article draft. One small issue - you need to convert your references into properly-formatted citations. You can do that using the Cite tool with a DOI, but the URLs you used are simply search strings for Proquest. They are only accessible to people who are logged into your university's library; the rest of us have no way of knowing what your sources are. (If you reply to this message here, please include  in your response, to ensure that I see your reply.) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:47, 22 November 2016 (UTC)