User talk:Adoobs/Audio editing software

This article has a lot of relevant information about audio editing. The lead overall is well written and gives me a sense of what the article is about. There is one thing that you can add is to the speech research and list of DAWS. Overall, looks like not too much work to add on to this article.

Btsailfish (talk) 21:53, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Hey team, I reviewed your work. In case you cant access it, here is what I said:

Your lead is strong and makes great points. However, it could use better transitions between sentence to sentence.

The "History" section could be stronger and longer as it is currently 1-2 sentences long.

The rest of the article is strong and very detailed. However, it does look like walls of text. I would add more pictures, maybe every other section in your article? This way, it can keep the reader entertained.

As cool as audio editing software may be, it can be hard to understand to someone who doesn't know anything about it.

Diligent Daisy (talk) 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello, There are some grammar edits that need to be made, which will be given at a later date. But overall, the article needs more photos and references, and expansion on the history and speech research sections. In the List of DAWs section move somewhere else or explain more. Wxgirl24 (talk) 14:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)