User talk:Adphysics/Peggy Cebe

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Hi, here are some thoughts about your sandbox:
 * You are only citing one source right now. You should add more citations to reliable sources.
 * In general, all content on Wikipedia should be referenced. If consecutive sentences come from the same source, the citation can be added once at the end of the consecutive sentences rather than duplicated at the end of each sentence. In that vein, no paragraph should end without a citation, and no paragraphs should lack citations. I see several paragraphs that lack citations, which is a red flag. Where does this content come from? How will the reader know it's verifiable?
 * Also, we avoid titles like "Dr." or "Prof". When referring to the subject of a biography, just use their surname.

Your biggest priority moving forward is to add more citations to a variety of sources. Make sure no paragraph ends without a citation! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:32, 2 June 2020 (UTC)