User talk:Adrianabuen/Raymond Luczak/Michaelreyna Peer Review

The information that was provided for this article was great! There was a lot of stuff that was informative and none of the information seemed to be used to make the reader think of anything else or persuade them to think a certain way. The only things that I can see were missing were the lead which is something that can easily be fixed, a photo if possible, and I do think a couple more citations may be needed around areas where information was provided just so the readers know where to find specific pieces of information, but it was overall a great a article so far!