User talk:Adrie1661/sandbox

Hello, I just wanted to say that I cited the same article each time I used it information, is that ok for wikipedia ? Adrie1661 (talk) 21:59, 22 May 2019 (UTC)

Hi!

I think that this topic is really interesting!There are a couple sentences that summarize a bit too much, for example, "Showing the death of the main character that had aids or HIV virus, was significant because it implied that the virus was deadly, and death could occur to anyone with the disease." I think that this is obvious from the content and maybe not necessary. Also, it leads to the claim that, "This is important because people in South Africa were misinformed of the dangers of contracting the virus whether it was because they did not feel comfortable reaching out for information, or because they never realized how dangerous it is," which isn't cited. It feels like common sense, but I think that the lack of education needs to be cited. The Peru section was really strong! I'd suggest maybe finding another source though, just to add to the strength of the overall article.