User talk:Adrifaye/Blind (SZA song)

Peer Review
Hello! I love this song and I love how you've started adding to this Wikipedia page. Other than a few small typo corrections that I made, it seems like the grammar, structure and tone of this article reads really well. I have a few suggestions about how you could continue to further improve this article:


 * 1) In the composition section, in the second paragraph you start to describe the lyric meanings in more detail. Making this into its own section could be a good idea to separate the lyrical composition and the meanings.
 * 2) The critical reception section confuses me slightly. Will this just be a section in which you put reviews from critics? That would be a good idea but I think compiling a larger collection of reviews from various critics would be interesting.
 * 3) Finally, adding a picture of the album cover could be a nice touch to get an image into the page! I'm a very visual kind of person and seeing pictures is always nice (at least in my opinion!)

Let me know if you have any questions about my feedback! It seems like you're already so close to being able to finalize and publish the real deal!

All the best,

Isabel Iander2 (talk) 05:06, 27 January 2023 (UTC)