User talk:Adrmar09

Thanks for creating your user account and putting a link on my talk page for this assignment. Don't hesitate to let me know if you need any help. Hoopes (talk) 22:09, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

I think you did a nice job of including additional information to the article on coca. However, please see my edits, including the addition of many hyperlinks to other articles. I also edited your language, which was a bit verbose (using "the coca leaf" frequently instead of simply "coca"), and included some redundancies and subjective observations. Please consider using the "ref name" tag to create a shorthand for frequently referenced sources. This will make the references section more compact. Some additional inclusion of specific examples (of architecture, for example, or military conquests, or mention of specific Inca emperors who increased coca cultivation) would be helpful. You could also include references to agricultural strategies such as terraces] that were used by the Incas to increase coca production, and mention communities such as Cochabamba, described in Spanish chronicles as a location for intensive coca production. Note also that I included a hyperlink for the article on mit'a, which is a critical part of the context of coca. Hoopes (talk) 21:38, 12 April 2020 (UTC)