User talk:Adrugby/sandbox

Your proposed initial edits based on Coogan
Your analysis seems to be in the right direction. However, you have not yet written any specific sentences that could be placed into a Wikipedia article (I think), so maybe go ahead and compose sentences based on your analysis?

Then -- put the course banner on the relevant WP article Talk page(s) and explain a bit what you are planning, in a new section of the article Talk page. Also -- tell your team to look at your sandbox and give you some feedback! Good luck! ProfGray (talk) 23:40, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Covenant paragraphs
This is a real good start. But the paragraphs require some copy editing, i.e., revising, to be more encyclopedic style. Can you get some advice on this from your team? Or from one of the online ambassadors to the course? ProfGray (talk) 19:20, 9 March 2015 (UTC)