User talk:AdvertiseEditor

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Your article has been moved to AfC space
Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:AdvertiseEditor/Karim Fakhrawi has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Karim Fakhrawi, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article, if you have any questions please ask on my talk page! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 00:46, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Alpha_Quadrant   (talk)  00:48, 28 October 2011 (UTC)


 * AdvertiseEditor, You made some basic mistakes here that ignored the fundamentals and the advise you were given. First, you got rid of the statement notablity. The lead is supposed to communicate the reason why he should be included in an encyclopedia. You seemed to have added more information but some of it was incorrect. For instance, the role of Irina Bokova as head of UNESCO means she can not order investigations. If you had sourced the information carefully, you might not have made those factual errors. Also, you didn't really put the situation in Bahrain into context. Most of all, the entire article was unsourced. That is why all of those templates were placed in your sandbox copy. The article was not credible. Other sections were left blank. It was sloppy. Don't take shortcuts. I concur with the rejection, it was too early for you submit without the revision you needed to have made. You should fix it and resubmit. This time follow the fundamentals! Crtew (talk) 01:54, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Evansville meetup
You're invited to help plan and attend Wikimedia's very first Evansville meetup! Bob the WikipediaN (talk • contribs) 02:50, 2 May 2012 (UTC)