User talk:AdvertiseEditor/Karim Fakhrawi

Peer Review
MasterValdi- It does not seem like you have a lot of information on your person. Background info would be good. Information on his career, and maybe his family if you can. Why was this person so famous, or notable? Maybe get some references, and look for external links to make your article better.

Review
I agree with MasterValdi in that you need to do more research. When you do cite, use inline citation in the format that I added for your main reference. I also addded sections to organize your work. Your entry is missing any kind of context that would put his death into perspective and show its importance. You do have the beginning of a notability statement. Find out more. Flesh out the details. I added a number of questions in your entry, like (Who?) and you should take that as a pointer to add information. Find reactions from UNESCO or other organizations.To add internal links to Wikipedia, just add two brackets before an after words that are likely to have entries, like his news outlet.Crtew (talk) 22:09, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Find out more about Al Wefaq and his possible ties to it.Crtew (talk) 17:40, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Add a link at Alwasat (Bahraini newspaper)Crtew (talk) 17:50, 27 October 2011 (UTC)