User talk:Adyereeves02/COVID-19 pandemic in Hawaii

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Nice start, but some thoughts on how you might improve this Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:02, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't need to use quotations for purely factual information like the number of cases. You probably don't need to repeat the county-by-county information since it's in the table. Since this is information that needs to be updated every day, you should be conscious of how many times you include it in the article.
 * Wikipedia is sparse with capitalisation. Section headers should use sentence capitalisation - only capitalise the first word and any proper nouns. Avoid capitalising "The" as well.
 * The style guide also avoids calling people by titles and honorifics. "Governor David Y. Ige" should only be spelled out once in the article body. After that, "Ige" or "David Ige".
 * Generally speaking, only report the names of sources if they're likely to be important. So rather than saying One article entitled "Don't Come: Hawaii Enforces Strict Lock down Measures" suggests say something like An article from Bloomberg News suggests

Thank you! I appreciate all of the suggestions! Adyereeves02 (talk) 21:43, 22 May 2020 (UTC)