User talk:Aeburtner/sandbox

I agree that the existing information on Bonnie Bassler is well-written in a neutral tone and provides introductory information that helps a reader to understand what great contributions she has made to science. Further information on the work she has done as well as her early life may contribute greatly to this article. The amount of awards she has received is phenomenal, and it is well highlighted in the existing information. I would suggest thinking about these questions in researching further information about Bonnie Bassler in order to expand and balance the article:

What undergraduate research did she complete? Are there other experiences she had as a student that led to the work she has done or is currently doing? Is there further information about the early life of Bonnie Bassler that helps us understand how she chose her career?

Again, there is a great introduction to letting the reader know who Bonnie Bassler is. There are an abundance of references listed, and in taking a look through some randomly selected ones, I saw there are a few whose links are no longer active or accessible. I would suggest seeing how those could be updated as well as contributing some new references as you find more information. I notice you have identified other topics to research that would fit well into the page on Bonnie Bassler, and I agree that those ideas would fit in well and contribute greatly to this page! Happy research! Geboenke18 (talk) 15:47, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

My apologies, it seems as though the sandbox information on the linked account (Victoria's) had not updated the newly added information since I last checked! I have further comments on her talk page that you can refer to with respect to the current progress. Geboenke18 (talk) 19:23, 27 February 2020 (UTC)