User talk:Aelindqu

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Aelindq : JRC Peer Review
1. The article has a strong lead sentence. The content is all insightful and relevant. Sources seem reliable and come from various places. Activist was a strong adjective and it helped understand who she was. 2. Changes include adding more content, minimum to have a strong leading paragraph. As a reader, it would be helpful to know more background information about her, including how she became an activist (?). From the Wiki page, it is a little hard to understand what kind of activist they were because it states three different categories: civil rights, African American, and academic. If she is all those, it would be helpful to clarify that early on. These changes would be descriptive and thorough in the details of her life. Additions could include links to her foundation, or any images of her. 3. The most important thing would be to add content. Even though it is all relevant, there is very little content. 4. Didn't find anything applicable to the Florida Holocaust Museum. Signed ElisaElisa3796 (talk) 03:40, 6 November 2018 (UTC)