User talk:Aerinsong

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Welcome!
Hello, Aerinsong, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your draft
I moved your draft back to your sandbox. The article isn't ready for mainspace yet.

A Wikipedia article is supposed to start with a lead section that summarizes all the major points of the article. It should generally open with something like Article title is... and go on to succinctly say what the topic is in the opening sentence. If you are unable do this, your article title might not be right for a Wikipedia article. Right now, without a lead section, I'm not even sure what the article is about.

The remainder of the lead needs to summarize all the major points of the article, in proportion to the way they're covered in the body of the article. Nothing should be in the lead that's not discussed in more depth in the article body. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:45, 28 November 2022 (UTC)