User talk:Aespinal04/sandbox

Hello Angelica!

Here are some suggestions that you should consider:

In your stub about "Turtle in Paradise" you should make the second sentence shorter. For instance, instead of "Turtle is an eleven-year-old girl who is sent to live with her aunt and cousins in Key West, Florida, because her mother's employer refuses to let Turtle and her cat, Smokey, stay in her house." >> Turtle is an eleven-year-old girl, who is sent to live with her aunt and cousins in Key West, Florida. This is because her mother's employer refuses to let Turtle and her cat, Smokey, stay in her house.

Torsagirl19 (talk) 17:24, 27 January 2016 (UTC)