User talk:Af4718/Lee Bul/Franci8740 Peer Review

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Hey, I changed the specific examples of a lesser tone of neutrality. However, I believe as a whole, my article has a neutral tone. As for the lead, the article that I am editing already has a lead, Career and Major Works section; I'm solely writing a Biography and Cyborg Sculptures. I added more information about the New Generation/ 3-8-6 artists Af4718 16:33, 25 April 2023 (UTC)