User talk:Afackrell/sandbox3

6/11/2019 Evaluation by Paig5
Paig5 (Paig5) 11:12, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Points: 38/40
 * Grade: 95%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations This meets the expectations, I just have a few suggestions on some minor grammatical changes or sentence structure changes:

1. ...the former at 7.1% and Finland at 7.4%

2. Nokia, the telephone company, and...

Language
Meets Expectations Your language seems very professional.

Organization
Meets Standard Your paragraphs are plenty long enough and look great.

Coding
Meets Standard I don't see anything wrong with any of your coding.

Validity
Meets Standard All of your statements of facts are cited.

Completion
Meets Standard Everything is long enough and you have the right amount of sources.

Relevance
Meets Standard All information included pertains to the subject matter.

6/11/2019 Evaluation by Gabbym9903
Gabbym9903 (Gabbym9903) 14:24, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Points: 39/40
 * Grade: 97.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard The spelling and grammar of the edit look good overall with a few mistakes:

1. "industries in Finland as a whole are;" ; should be :

2. "employing about 79% of the cities workforce" cities should be city's

3. "produced by Nokia and 21% of the countries total exports' countries should be country's

4. "The company with distribute 30 million euro" I think with should be will

Language
Meets Standard. The edit is well-written with academic language.

Organization
Meets Standard The formatting looks good and paragraphs are not too long or too short.

Coding
Meets Standard The coding is correct, i didn't find any mistakes.

Validity
Meets Standard There are no signs of plagiarism and the sources used are reliable.

Completion
Meets Standard The edit meets the 5 paragraphs and 20 sources requirements.

Relevance
Meets Standard The flow of information is good and everything is related to the economy of Helsinki.

6/17/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright
DrMichaelWright (talk) 10:31, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

I had been hoping for better.
 * Points: 31/40
 * Grade: 77.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard.

Language
Meets standard.

Organization
Does not meet standard.
 * There are no subheaders that make this easier to read, and to provide a skeleton for other editors to add flesh to.
 * The paragraph about the airport properly belongs under the Transportation>Aviation header.
 * Most of your last paragraph also belongs under transportation.

Coding
Meets standard.

Validity
Nearly meets standard.
 * Your first sentence is from the original (which is not bad), but you eliminated the word 'Greater' and changed the reference. By omitting Greater, you essentially change the meaning where there was no need to do so.
 * "The gross value added annual growth has been around 4%.[2]" That datapoint is not backed up by the source offered, which replaces the source that is in the current Helsinki article.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Nearly meets standard.
 * "Finland joined the EU in 1995 and the European Economic and Monetary Union in 1999." This is not really relevant for this article.
 * "A study done in April 2019 comparing..." is about Finland as a whole, not Helsinki.