User talk:Afarrar825

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Hello, Afarrar825, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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A kitten for you!
I noticed a few typos and grammatical errors such throughout the paragraph so I would be sure to go back and double check the article before submitting the final draft in the future. You do a great job of explaining Hawaiian art and what types of media is consists of, however some of the wording of certain sentences tends to get a little repetitive, especially towards the end, and I would also to be sure to specify what part of the article you are working on (intro, timeline, artists, etc…)

Laurenk17 (talk) 00:59, 10 March 2020 (UTC) 

A kitten for you!
Hello! I really enjoyed what you had to say about your topic. However, it seemed to me that you did not have any links to add so that way people know what website you used when researching your topic. All that was used for sourcing was (Name.Date) which is helpful to know that you are citing someone, just maybe add the link so they know where you go the source from.

ChloeM99 (talk) 20:54, 23 March 2020 (UTC) 