User talk:Aferland

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Hello, Aferland, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Ways to improve Red Star: Organ of the Red Women's Detachment
Thanks for creating Red Star: Organ of the Red Women's Detachment.

A New Page Patroller Rosguill just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:

"This article relies too heavily on articles published in the subject itself, and needs more citations to independent resources. While it does include citations to other sources, as far as I can tell (with the exception of citation #1) these citations are not used to back up any claims about the subject and do not discuss the subject, but instead are used to provide historical context. It's totally acceptable (and desirable) to use sources to provide this context, but this should not be taken as a substitute for actual coverage of the subject in independent, reliable sources. Additionally, the article could use a bit more context in the lead, as it currently does not explain who the Red Women's Detachment were or where the Red Star was published"

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signed,Rosguill talk 15:15, 14 November 2018 (UTC)