User talk:Afgmcdonald/foodlibelsandbox

Overall this is a great article. Very well written and cited. My only critic would be that I think the component of censorship, or restriction of speech particularly, seems to play less of a main role. The first couple paragraphs, while very informational, seem less related to the specifics on censorship as the last paragraph. So i would say better to expand on that part.

--Alaila (talk) 04:42, 5 December 2018 (UTC)