User talk:Africaprime

Thanks for editing down the Brownsville section. I feel like it says alot of thing over and over and has a somewhat slightly racist bend (i.e., "males" v. "men" which I fixed). I'm thinking we could even take out the list of gang-related death in the "Facts" section cuz Brownville seems like the only Brooklyn neighborhood that has that's mentioned has experiencing gang violence which is obviously not true. I added a bunch of other questions in the text as hidden comment that perhaps you or a Brownsville resident could answer to make the article as strong as possible. When I have time I will research into some of these as well.--Aichikawa (talk) 21:34, 5 October 2009 (UTC)Aichikawa