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"The Feminine Brigades of Saint Joan of Arc (Spanish (Links to an external site.) : Las Brigadas Femeninas de Santa Juana de Arco), or Guerrilleras de Cristo (women-soldiers of Christ) is a secret military society for women." This sentence implies that the group is still active, but I don't see anything about current activity in your article. You reference them in the past tense throughout the article and mention that the group disbanded after the war. You may also want to consider including information about what happened to those involved after the group disbanded, if any such information exists. If not, you should say so. AlexisElena (talk) 21:30, 18 November 2016 (UTC)AlexisElena

"The brigades started out with only 17 women, but turned rapidly into 135 women members within days and even reached 800 in Guadalajara by 1925" -The brigades began with 17 women, but grew to 135 members within days and 800 in Guadalajara by 1925.

"Jesuit Sociologist Father Alfredo Mendez Medina worked with Sofia del Valle in 1922 to form groups and conferences of women similar to ones he was organizing of working men to spread teachings on the church and social action " -Jesuit Sociologist, Father Alfredo Mendez Medina worked with Sofia del Valle in 1922 to form groups of women to teach the public about the church and social action."

"Recruitment began in Catholic women's colleges, but quickly spread to among the indigenous population and across all social classes." -Recruitment been in Catholic women's colleagues, but quickly spread throughout the indigenous population and across all social classes.

"They also donated food, clothes, and bought medicine to donate/give to the poor and orphans of families impacted by the Cristero war." -They donated food, clothing, and medicine to the poor and those orphaned by the Cristero war. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Afvasquez (talk • contribs) 21:49, 21 November 2016 (UTC)