User talk:Agarbacz/sandbox

Hkim856 (talk) 20:33, 18 October 2018 (UTC) Great job. This is one of the most informative and structured articles by far. It's almost ready to go, but I wonder if you could add a bit more to the "impact" paragraph, which includes anecdotes only. One way to improve the paragraph would be to demonstrate the impact of sasangfans more forcefully? I guess this article might helpful: http://www.tjprc.org/publishpapers/2-55-1491828486-2.IJCMSJUN20172.pdf

Cynthia's Peer Review
I think your article is neutral and doesn't contain anything that's heavily biased. You used good details that help me to understand your topic and the details wasn't distracting at all. You did a good job in incorporating the facts and supporting it with reliable sources. So far, everything I have read is relevant to the topic you have chosen. Overall, your article was great and I enjoyed reading it! Ladykayyy1 (talk) 02:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Yuling's Peer Review
Your contribution to this article is logical and connected. Sources are varied and language is not biased. Good job! But just out of curiosity, is there any sources saying what is the possible solution to prevent sasaeng fan from intruding idols' privacy and hurting idols?HobyHu (talk) 02:51, 21 October 2018 (UTC)Yuling Hu

Ashlee's Peer Review
I'm impressed with the amount of sources and footnotes you've compiled into your sandbox. Even the addition of personal accounts/ statements made from Korean pop idols helped to back up your wikipedia topic. It's been informative and I have learned a lot of new things from this topic. I hope to see more added onto the "effects on idols" and just to see the final product. Axiong36 (talk) 03:08, 4 November 2018 (UTC)