User talk:Agenorefabbri

Agenore Fabbri
Hi, thanks for message. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, or they will be deleted.
 * Although you gave two references, one just showed some pictures, didn't appear to support the text. The only other ref was to an old print publication with apparently no web link. If that is all there is about him, and there is nothing written about him on the Internet, he's not notable.
 * If you can find more references, you should place references in-line, so we can see what facts each is supporting.


 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: most sig¬nificant artists... centre for art of international importance... important terracotta and ceramic works... he is invited to the most important national and international... his work is celebrated... may be rightfully considered an extraordinary creative artist... enriching the history of 20th century art with an imaginative language... repertory of inventions and eccentric plastic creations that were rich in content as well as in form, with a consistently passionate expressive will... devoted to a new vision of hope and love... colorful and joyful revival... according to some critics (who?)... the lesson of one of the most restless artists of the postwar period.
 * The article was created in a single edit without wikilinks or references, and with some strange mid-word breaks. It as if it was copied from an unknown and possibly copyrighted source. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain.
 * You have an obvious conflict of interest when it comes to editing articles about this subject. Thank you for declaring your interest. If, after reading the information about notability linked above, you still believe that your organisation is notable enough for a Wikipedia article (and that there is significant coverage in reliable, independent secondary sources), you could, if you wish, post a request at Requested articles for the article to be created. See also Best practices for editors with conflicts of interest.

If you want to try again, do a draft here and let me know if you want me to take a look  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  07:35, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

December 2013
Hello, I'm Jimfbleak. I wanted to let you know that I undid one or more of your recent contributions because it appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  19:37, 4 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi, I've seen your message, but I'm going out for the day, it will be tomorrow before I can take a look  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:20, 28 December 2013 (UTC)

comments
OK, it looks a lot better now. Some suggestions.
 * It would be better to put your references in-line between ref tags, so we can see what facts each is supporting
 * References that are not in English should have (in Italian) added
 * Publications (books, magazines, journals, catalogues etc) are normally italicised
 * I don't speak Italian, but in English biographies are normally written in the past tense, it looks odd to me to read eg "he attends" instead of "he attended", similarly throughout.
 * The fact that the article is translated from the Italian Wikipedia is pretty marginal, since no Wikipedia is a reliable source. I'd put that fact right at the end of the article, possibly between  tags
 * avoid "received numerous awards", "author of numerous monumental works", it's a bit spammy. Either give a number or rephrase as "received awards including..." or similar.

When you have considered these comments, repost using the "move" tab. Don't copy-and-paste  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:49, 29 December 2013 (UTC)