User talk:Agg24

Your submission at Articles for creation: IVIS® Spectrum in vivo imaging system (April 22)
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Gbawden (talk) 10:09, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:IVIS® Spectrum in vivo imaging system


A tag has been placed on Draft:IVIS® Spectrum in vivo imaging system, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Is your class assignment to successfully write a Wikipedia article? If so, that is extremely unfair to you as a student, as you have limited control over the process and are under pressure to get a grade. Is your instructor making use of the Wikipedia Education Program materials? If you add your email address to your account(doing so does not make it visible to the public unless you respond to that email) and enable emails to you, the text can be emailed to you. What contributions do you want to make if unblocked? 331dot (talk) 08:56, 23 April 2021 (UTC)

The class assignment was to write a draft Wikipedia article, but we would get bonus points if it got published, so we were asked to submit it. My instructor is not using the Wikipedia Education Program, but I could bring that up to him as an option. I have added my email to my account and allowed other users to email me. can you email me my draft so I can turn it in for my class project? I will not be attempting to publish it to Wikipedia again. I have learned a lot about Wikipedia from this experience, and my contributions in the future will only be appropriate encyclopedia entries. I am a PhD student studying biomedical engineering, so I would like to contribute my expertise in the field to Wikipedia when I can. Agg24 (talk) 16:09, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
 * It sounds fine since you are not being required to see a draft placed in the encyclopedia. I've seen that more often than not. 331dot (talk) 16:51, 23 April 2021 (UTC)

Are you an administrator that manages blocks? Is there someone else I need to contact to get the block removed? Thanks for all your input and help! Agg24 (talk) 21:08, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I believe you were the deleting administrator on my draft Draft:IVIS® Spectrum in vivo imaging system. I cannot post on your talk page since I've been blocked from editing, so I'm hoping to reach you here. I urgently need to retrieve my draft so that I can turn it in for a final project for my graduate class in Biomedical Optics by this Wednesday. Would you be able to email it to me? Thank you! Agg24 (talk) 21:08, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

I'm interested in hearing any comment you have as well. 331dot (talk) 08:52, 26 April 2021 (UTC)


 * 331dot, sounds genuine enough, I'm happy for you to unblock, subject to the usual provisos about not editing in the same problematic area. Agg24, you made something of a rod for your own back scattering ® everywhere, that's usually a sure sign of a company editor, as are claims like The IVIS® Spectrum has several unique features that make it the most advanced in vivo imaging system on the market today. I'll send the deleted text by email. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  10:02, 26 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Jimfbleak, I completely understand this now. I think the problem was that most of my classmates for this assignment chose to write about a general type of medical imaging (i.e. optical coherence tomography), whereas I chose to write about a specific brand name device. We were supposed to compare our technology to other current technologies, but I can absolutely see how that came across in my writing. Thank you and very much for your understanding, and thanks for sending me my draft.