User talk:Agottschlich

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Hello, Agottschlich, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Wikipedia Article Peer Review
Hi Aly, This looks like an interesting article! I have a few tips that can help your editing process. It looks like the article is already organized pretty well, so you won't have to worry about that. And there were a good amount of difficult terms that had already been cited. But, you can definitely add a lot more in the technologies section of the article under the Industrial water treatment section- biological, physicochemical treatments and membrane-separation are all empty. And I believe I may have seen a few grammatical errors in there as well. More specifically, you should define the terms boiler water treatment and cooling water treatment, because they do not have any explanations. Good luck! Kassy-gregory (talk) 05:58, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Kassy Gregory

Peer review
Hi Aly! I feel the topic of this article is especially important for SDG6, and therefore, your work is very meaningful. The organization looks formed pretty well. You might want to add more information about what kind of treatments there are in the lead section so that readers can grasp the overall idea of the article. There is a sentence with a "citation needed" mark under the water treatment drinking water treatment section, so you may want to add a citation here. Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chris199012 (talk • contribs) 07:31, 19 November 2019 (UTC)