User talk:Agt3j/The Dangers of Smoking in Bed

Hi friends! The article overall is very well structured. I like how the synopsis is structured, and the lead is great. If at all possible, however, I would like to see if there are more awards that the book or writer has won, but the structure looks great, and the book sounds very intriguing. It's really hard to fill these out right now, but if she has other accolades, I would include them. Same with the book. ZNThomas08 (talk) 02:20, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey guys! I like your Synopsis section. My suggestions are a little picky but in the Publication and Translation section, you might want to switch the placement of the "her" and "Megan McDowell" in the second sentence so that it's clear you've switched from Enriques to McDowell. Also, in the reception section, I'm not quite sure what it means when you say that reviewers were "citing the haunting environments..." Other than that it looks great! Skyking204 (talk) 20:34, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

-Your article looks great for the most part! A small suggestion would be to included the title of your book in the original language, like (Spanish: Title). This could also be done for the author's other works if they were translated into English. Also you don't have any clickable links on your article to direct you to other Wikipedia articles, such as author's wiki page, so I would suggest adding some (even if it doesn't lead to an actual article it could be useful to add links for things that should have an article). I think the synopsis does a great job summarizing the book and the last two sections look good though they are short there isn't much to add. Though there are a few small improvement to be made it look great overall! Sapigian (talk) 02:58, 12 April 2022 (UTC)