User talk:Agustinpm703

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Hello, Agustinpm703, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Vaporfly shoes
Hi! I have some notes about your work.


 * The section you have added is a bit lengthy and puts too much emphasis on this one controversy. It needs to be summarized more. I would look into creating a separate article for the Vaporfly controversy, to be honest, since it looks like there's quite a bit of coverage and repercussions that came about as a result of the shoes. I've edited your sandbox so that this is set up more like an article.


 * Avoid headers that pose a question to the readers. This can be seen as persuasive writing and too casual for Wikipedia. It can even be seen as us leading the reader and being non-neutral, depending on how it's written and posed.


 * Make sure that you only summarize what has been explicitly stated in the source material. We can't draw conclusions or make our own observations. Also, we can't bring in prior issues or similar elements unless there is a source that specifically mentions them in relation to this controversy. For example, the mention of the athlete who left to work for the World Athletics is kind of off topic. It would only be relevant if this were to have impacted the decision(s) of the World Athletics any and this was mentioned by someone in a reliable source. Otherwise, the tie isn't really important to this specific topic.


 * Wikipedia cannot be used to source itself - it's important to make sure that you're careful to avoid using unreliable sources.

I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:17, 2 April 2020 (UTC)