User talk:Ahenry131313/sandbox

your information is good and answers all questions, but your sentences are choppy in some places, so I'd recommend changing the wording to make the article flow better. --Deeemarie (talk) 04:47, 26 October 2018 (UTC)deeemarie

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I fixed the flow of it and tried to make it less choppyAhenry131313 (talk) 15:41, 26 October 2018 (UTC)