User talk:Ahiggs1013/sandbox

In your lead I suggest talking about what lactic acid fermentation is and give background on the topic itself. It is good that you are relating it to humans and health, however even this does not give much information. Maybe make a subsection that addresses the effects of lactic acid fermentation within the human body and then use your lead to discuss the background of what exactly lactic acid fermentation is. Zacharyherbert (talk) 23:44, 10 October 2019 (UTC)

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In WikiEdu, you guys chose the topic Lactic acid cycle, but it looks like you're writing about Lactic acid fermentation. That's fine. Just be careful not to mix up the two. And check the existing article to make sure you're not rewriting material that's already there. Ninjatacoshell (talk) 21:52, 11 October 2019 (UTC)