User talk:Ahiredits/sandbox

Delegative Democracy Draft Peer Edit
This article is definitely off to a good start. It's pretty developed so I see you are just adding to it as it a stub article. I think that the lead section could be slightly more developed since it is pretty short. Also one thing I noticed right away was that the article was flagged for needing more citations for verification so I would focus on fixing that to help the credibility of the article. I think the coverage of the article is pretty balanced with the comparisons that are included as well as the examples. I would suggest possibly moving the little box with the image from the bottom to the top because it is pretty helpful for understanding and it would be more visually appealing to have it at the top of the article. The citations that are used all seem to be from scholarly sources and the information is presented from a neutral point of view. Good work so far! Ella12345678 (talk) 22:52, 1 April 2018 (UTC)