User talk:Ahmed Abdelkariem/sandbox

So first thing to do would be to add some more citations considering you only have one. A little more information could do better as well.Majid367 (talk) 18:39, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Umar Rana 1. add citations. 2. go more in depth into each theme. Rme22031 (talk) 18:48, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

I would suggest adding a bit more information in order to have more sources to cite. I would also include where exactly you would want to input this information by placing the specific heading and sub - headings above your information. --18:55, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Brbrewer94 (talk)

Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions. :)
Hi there. I was just browsing through Shalor's talk page and taking a look at what student editors were working on. I added the two boxes to the top of your talk page. The second box might help you find sources (I set it to search for the name of the author).

I have a few suggestions. First, I recommend becoming familiar with Wikipedia's guide to writing biographies. It will probably help you to give your article a logical structure that is similar to other biographical articles. This way the organization of your article will be straightforward to you: Manual of Style/Biography. There is a lot of information on that page, so don't feel like you have to read it all now.

Now that I've read what you have written so far I see that you are focusing on her work Jury of her Peers. If the article is about that, then I will change the search box for you. Just let me know if you need me to.

I think that once you look at the biography link, then you will have much more ideas of low hanging fruit that you could include in the article. You can also look at other biographies to see an example. For example, Mr. Rogers is a good example of a biography. Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions. Sincerely, Shashi Sushila Murray, (message me) 07:41, 4 December 2018 (UTC)