User talk:Ahussain36/Appalachian stereotypes

It's very nice how you broke down your draft into different sections, it makes the article a lot easier to understand when it is clearly structured. When I look over the actual Wikipedia article, I can see that it is not completed yet and needs some expanding, so I think it's safe to say that some of your expansion sections are quite short as of right now. There is definitely a lot of room for more information within each of your different sections. To improve your article, I noticed that within the specific sections it seems almost as if it's kind of all over the place, so I think putting the specific sections in a more organized fashion would be easier to read and grasp the information you're trying to display. Other than that I think that you have a great initial draft! --Marissasantora (talk) 19:51, 10 March 2021 (UTC)