User talk:Aidan Jenson

Aidan Jenson, you are invited to the Teahouse!
You've created some good content here, but it's not clear to me how what you've written would be added to the existing article on Destiny 2. Note also that you will need to provide more information for the Web resources that you have cited. (Simply including URLs is not enough.) Did you look at the original Destiny 2 article before writing what you have here? I can see where parts of what you have written would fit into that article, but it's not clear that the whole thing hold together as a new section of the article. Is that what you had intended? Hoopes (talk) 23:46, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

I've made some alterations to the big block of text in your original draft in order to organize it more as something that would be appropriate for an encyclopedia entry. The text still needs to be condensed in order to be more succinct, but this will give you an idea of what a section on lost cities in Destiny 2 might look like. Hoopes (talk) 00:02, 19 December 2020 (UTC)