User talk:Aidancesar/sandbox

peer review
I like the style of writing a lot, and it is clearly a lot more descriptive and in depth than the original article. Wording gets somewhat repetitive towards the end (use of word "mission), so I think it could just be more streamlined in order to get the point across more effectively.

Also remember to delete the miscellaneous notes before publishing. Camillekonopka (talk) 18:26, 23 March 2018 (UTC)