User talk:Aimua4me/sandbox

Nice evaluation, Aimua! It shows that you've engaged with the article, thought about what is present and what is missing, and how you might expand upon it. I'm looking forward to seeing your article draft in the coming days. Griffyn1987 (talk) 20:16, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

I think you picked a good article to improve. The current Wikipedia page about transnationalism is way too short so adding information would be, as you already mentioned, beneficial. It is a great idea to make the article easier to read as well: some sentences are quite difficult to understand. You are also right by pointing out that the explanation of the term ‘transnationality’ given right now, is too vague. Personally, the article does not make clear how transnationalism is different from internationalism and supranationalism. I think it is necessary that you improve the introduction and give a spot-on definition of transnationality. This way, when people need a quick explanation for transnationalism, they don’t need to read the whole article. For making people read the whole article is not the main objective of a Wikipedia page. Furthermore, explaining how these three terms are different from each other, is an essential part of your article. The reader of your article needs to be aware that what you are describing, transnationality, is not the same as internationality. It is a good idea to focus on the political side of transnationality, for that is the more difficult form of transnationality. In addition on focussing on politics, I think you should leave the examples of transnational corporations. This does not add much to the information you are giving, since you are focussing on nationality in terms of politics. I would therefore suggest that you only give some examples of transnational political institutions and NGO’s, such as the European Union. In conclusion, I think that you have a good idea on how to improve the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.153.182.109 (talk) 19:06, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

thank you, Arnold, your response is nice and helpful to me. I will take your advice and follow the hits you gave me. thanks once again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aimua4me (talk • contribs) 17:45, 28 March 2019 (UTC)

hello, Arnold, I tried to take your advice but unfortunately, I could not get sources to get information from. thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aimua4me (talk • contribs) 00:39, 15 April 2019 (UTC)