User talk:AirBritt/sandbox

Community Organizations Peer Review 1
1. In the very first paragraph, we suggest adding more clarity to the definition of community organizations. Maybe listing or mentioning the varied names of community organizations and their differences (if there are any). So for example, nonprofit organization vs. community benefit organization vs. settlement house.

2. We suggest making changes to the flow of your headings. Right now you have History in the United States followed by Globalization and then Examples. Maybe you could elaborate more in the History of the U.S. and then do a section on current trends followed by the Globalization section. You could even include Globalization within current/modern section. After the flow of history to current, you could include the examples section and within that section make subheaders for History in US, Current and Globalizations and provide examples for each section. Just something to think about to make it all flow more cohesively.

3. Have you thought about adding an image? Might make it more powerful

4. Lastly for formatting/grammar, there's one word that is highlighted in blue and I think it's suppose to be Divestment but it says Divestmentfrom.

Overall good work! Definitely important to have a Wiki page on the significance of community organizations. -Nikki & Loren SSWUM15 (talk)